Talk:Joselito Agustin

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Lilmalicoat0224, it would have been better for you to have started to build your entry within your user pages as a sandbox. I would suggest as you tell Agustin's story, you imagine a reader who knows absolutely nothing. You're presuming too much. This is leading you to skip over details. I inserted several times: "by whom?" Identify the sources of information. You made avoidable factual errors when you called Bacarra a province of the city of Ilocos Norte when Bacarra is a city of the Ilocos Norte province. Did you see how I made a link for Bacarra? Do this throughout to link to other Wikipedia articles.

You're leaving out some very important details, such as the death threats, who was charged, and what happened in the case against the Pacific Velasco. You'll have to dig into more recent articles to find more. Use alleged until you know for sure! This is very important as you are writing about a living person. If impunity is the case, then this too is important. In this case the reader is wanting more... Look into this. Use Lexis-Nexis.

You can develop the context by doing further research on related areas, such as corruption. Crtew (talk) 18:58, 11 October 2011 (UTC)

Lilmalicoat0224, a peer of yours wrote the following but didn't sign it: Crtew (talk) 18:25, 11 October 2011 (UTC)

The 5 W's were good. Information was a little bit scarce, but again so was mine so I can not really judge and that information was a little hard to find on some things.

Death: Was Good! Explained exactly what happened and the reason it came about.

Context: It was below standard and that not much was really explained about the country. Some holes were definetly missing.

Impact: The impact of the story was good. The user explained why the journalist deserves to have a wikipedia page about him. Goes into detail about his outspokeness as a broadcaster.

Personal: Personal information about the journalist was below standard in that nothing was communicated about his personal life or career.

Internal and External Links: None, were provided about this journalist, which could be considered below standard, however, with my journalist it was hard to find some information on things.

References: Refernces were good. All seemed to be listed correctly

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