Talk:Joseph Carpenter Silversmith Shop/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sven Manguard (talk · contribs) 23:25, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

GAN Quicksheet 1.24 SM (Criteria)

Starting comments: This needs a copyedit, but is otherwise in pretty solid shape right now.  S ven M anguard  Wha?  23:25, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

1. Well written: 
 * a. prose/copyright: Pictogram resolved.svg
 * I did some copyediting, but I don't think that any of it was "major" (nothing conceptual, nothing controversial). You used "it" a couple too many times this time around.
 * b. MoS compliance: Pictogram resolved.svg

2. Accurate and verifiable: 
 * a. provides references: Pictogram resolved.svg
 * b. proper citation use: Pictogram resolved.svg
 * Unless I'm missing something, the " Accompanying 14 photos, from 1970, 1972, and undated" part of the fifth source isn't relevant to this article. That's not a problem, you can leave it in, but I'm not sure it makes sense to include it.
 * c. no original research: Pictogram resolved.svg
 * AGF on Fodor's Modern Guides New England for paraphrasing, 2b, and 2c concerns.

3. Broad in coverage: 
 * a. covers main aspects: Pictogram resolved.svg
 * b. focused/on topic: Pictogram resolved.svg

4. Neutral: 5. Stable:

6. Image use: 
 * a. license/tagging correct: Pictogram resolved.svg
 * I cleaned up the file description page on Commons, although it was mainly putting the information in the correct slots. A modern photograph of the building would be nice, if you could find one.
 * b. relevant/properly captioned: Pictogram resolved.svg

7. Additional items not required for a GA, but requested by the reviewer: 
 * a. images that should have alt texts have them: N/A
 * b. general catch all and aesthetics: Pictogram resolved.svg

Comments after the initial review: This was an easy one. Still waiting on you for responses to issues in the other GAN I'm doing, but this one is fine as is. PROMOTED  S ven M anguard   Wha?  01:47, 27 April 2014 (UTC)