Talk:Joseph Clover (artist)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:03, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:45, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Avoid single-sentence paragraphs in the lead, probably needs to only be two paras anyway.
 * "his fiancé" shouldn't that be "his fiancée"?
 * "the Swedenborgian New Church" I would put "New Church" into the pipe.
 * "and Aylsham, the small Norfolk town of Aylsham where" not getting this?
 * "a farmer.[5][3] " ref order.
 * "the 12 children" twelve.
 * "working life in Norwich, from" overlinked.
 * "Swedenborgian New Church" link this again first time outside the lead.
 * "painted his uncle.[20][15]" ref order.
 * "c.1803" space.
 * "until 1807.[15] In 1806" repetitive.
 * "exceptional".[15][11] " ref order.
 * Could link List of mayors of Norwich for lead/body.
 * "1796-1832" etc in gallery captions should be en-dash.
 * "c.1813" space.
 * "Northumberland - August" en-dash.
 * "Arms public House" why capital H?
 * Year ranges in refs need to be en-dash not hyphens.
 * ISBNs should be consistent format.
 * "Society 1810-2010. London" en-dash.
 * Any watercolourist categories?
 * All the above have ben addressed. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 08:07, 5 September 2021 (UTC)