Talk:Joseph Favre/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: No Great Shaker (talk · contribs) 16:21, 25 February 2022 (UTC)

Review

 * 1) Well written: the prose is clear and concise.
 * 2) Well written: the spelling and grammar are correct.
 * 3) Contains a short description which complies with recommendations.
 * 4) Complies with the MOS guidelines for lead sections.
 * 5) Complies with the MOS guidelines for article structure and layout.
 * 6) ''Complies with the MOS guidelines for words to watch.
 * 7) Complies with the MOS guidelines for writing about fiction – not applicable.
 * 8) Complies with the MOS guidelines for list incorporation.
 * 9) Complies with the MOS guidelines for use of quotations.
 * 10) All statements are verifiable with inline citations provided.
 * 11) All inline citations are from reliable sources, etc.
 * 12) Contains a list of all references in accordance with the layout style guideline.
 * 13) No original research.
 * 14) No copyright violations or plagiarism.
 * 15) Broad in its coverage but within scope and in summary style.
 * 16) Neutral.
 * 17) Stable.
 * 18) Illustrated, if possible.
 * 19) Images are at least fair use and do not breach copyright.

I'll be happy to do this review. Hope to provide some feedback soon. No Great Shaker (talk) 16:30, 25 February 2022 (UTC)

Points to be considered
Hello,. Hope you are well. I have just a few points, including two small changes I've already done.


 * I think, per MOS:JOBTITLES, that "bishop of Orléans" should be capitalised as it always references Félix Dupanloup in his official capacity, though not in the generic sense when it is only "the bishop laughed". I have an open mind on this, however. What do you think?


 * I wikilinked Valais as a canton only. I agree that countries like Switzerland should not be linked.


 * I amended the quotation in the last years section. The reference is normally placed after the colon to precede the blockquote; and in this case it applies to both sentences.

And that is it. This is unquestionably a good article and it passes the review. The man was a culinary genius and I've got an appetite now, after reading the article. I'll do the necessary at WP:GA. Well done and all the best. No Great Shaker (talk) 12:37, 26 February 2022 (UTC)


 * @No Great Shaker Thanks very much! I see what you mean about the bishop title - I'll change that to capitalize it. -- asilvering (talk) 16:39, 26 February 2022 (UTC)