Talk:Joseph Lstiburek

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It has been suggested in feedback HERE that this bio is too long and involved. I encourage someone to take a shot at making it more concise. I was so focused on finding good sources I got carried away. I will step away from the article for awhile and come back fresh to edit in a month or so if nobody accepts the challenge before then. Thanks! ErinNik (talk) 17:06, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

Credentials
This article seems to be mostly about the subject's credentials, and borders on puffery. What is the substance of his accomplishment? What are the insights or innovations that he is actually known for? The article needs to go more in this direction and less in the direction of adulation.842U (talk)
 * On further investigation, the article is EXTREMELY poorly sourced, with many references coming directly from the subject of the article. Essentially, the article now serves to agrandize the subject, rather than citing his particular insights, methodologies, and breakthrough.  The circular referencing, by the subject for the subject, is indicative of very poor article quality and needs to be addressed.842U (talk) 22:07, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

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