Talk:Joseph Schwantner: New Morning for the World; Nicolas Flagello: The Passion of Martin Luther King/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:34, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * "and was released on the following Martin Luther King, Jr. Day in his honor." could work the wiklink to avoid repeating "Martin Luther King, Jr. Day" thing.
 * Like so? -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:00, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Billboard's Classical Albums chart" you've linked Billboard but not their classical chart here, any reason?
 * I cannot find an article specifically for the Classical albums chart. "Top Classical Albums" just redirects to "Billboard charts". -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:03, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
 * "are performed with little pause" I get it but would everyone?
 * Would "The nine sections of the work are performed with little pause in between" be better? -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:03, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
 * "a brief pause in between" would be better! The Rambling Man (talk) 16:35, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:37, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Any chance of reception outside of the US?
 * I included as much reception as I could find... -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:03, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

GAN checklist

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Mostly there besides what I wrote above.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold pending resolution of the trivial issues I noted above. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:48, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold pending resolution of the trivial issues I noted above. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:48, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
 * On hold pending resolution of the trivial issues I noted above. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:48, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
 * On hold pending resolution of the trivial issues I noted above. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:48, 30 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Thank you for taking time to review this article. Please let me know if there are any concerns that still need to be addressed. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:03, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
 * As ever, you're welcome. Let me know when you're done, and I'll re-review.  The Rambling Man (talk) 16:35, 2 July 2013 (UTC)