Talk:Joseph W. Kennedy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LT910001 (talk · contribs) 11:09, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

If there are no objections, I'll take this review. I'll note at the outset I've had no role in editing or creating this article. I welcome other editors at any stage to contribute to this review. I look forward to reviewing another fascinating article by you, Hawkeye7. I will spend a day familiarising myself with the article and then provide an assessment. As you might have noticed I use a template when starting my reviews so you will find this on the pages I'm reviewing. Kind regards, LT910001 (talk) 11:09, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for waiting. In conducting this review, I will:
 * Provide an assessment using WP:GARC
 * If this article does not meet the criteria, explain what areas need improvement.
 * Provide possible solutions that may (or may not) be used to fix these.

Commentary
As with your past entries, this is of very high quality, and very interesting to read. I really like the clear structure that you write with. From my WP:MED glasses, it'd be interesting to know what form of cancer he died from, especially considering his works with radioisotopes, but that's just a small whim. Additionally I note that the source incorrectly mentions his age.

Thank you again for your continued contributions, I've promoted the article and made the relevant changes, --LT910001 (talk) 00:14, 15 April 2014 (UTC)