Talk:Josh Aloiai

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Opening structure
There is obviously some conflict between Fleets and I here. To me, it seems pretty clear the lede is not long enough to warrant 2 paragraphs, and definitely doesn't need the WP:OVERLINK to the NRL twice in such a small intro. I'm not so concerned about this article in particular, but there appears to be pattern that every article should be the same in the name of "consistency", regardless of the actual content.

I'm going to change back once more. If it is reverted, I'll ask for a WP:3O and adhere to it. Doctorhawkes (talk) 21:39, 22 March 2021 (UTC)