Talk:Josh Hamilton/GA1

GA Review
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It's not ready for GA yet. It passes most of the Good Article Criteria but I think the section on the night club incident needs to be cut down to one paragraph. You also need to weed out some of the peacock terms like "torrid" and "stellar," especially since none of the sources use those terms. Reviewer: ~DC Let's Vent 16:49, 9 September 2010 (UTC) Seeing that my concerns haven't been addressed after 8 days, I'm failing it. Feel free to nominate it again. 10:45, 17 September 2010 (UTC)