Talk:Josh Penry

Weasel words
"Senator Penry continued his record of accomplishment..."

That's a pat on the back if there ever was one. Bios must avoid such vague platitudes, if they're to pass scrutiny on Wikipedia.

NPOV/Reads like an advertisement
After several months of inaction I have added the admin deletion request tag to the State House section. It's a joke. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.190.110.119 (talk) 17:45, 7 September 2009 (UTC)

Seriously. This article needs a lot of editing if it's to become NPOV. It reads like a piece of Josh Penry campaign literature. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.253.151.192 (talk) 04:16, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm not seeing it. It's no more or less promotional than any other politician's biography on Wikipedia. It may need a rewrite, but recommend removing the db-spam template.Alan (talk) 17:47, 7 September 2009 (UTC)

On second thought I agree, I'm just going to edit to balance all the glowing crapola. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.190.110.119 (talk) 17:55, 7 September 2009 (UTC)

I've removed the advert box, it's a little more balanced now. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.190.110.119 (talk) 18:36, 7 September 2009 (UTC)

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