Talk:Joshua Ilustre/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:48, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 14:48, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Biography

 * "Joshua Ilustre was born January 23, 1994 in Tamuning, Guam" - reword this piece of text so it reads as follows: Joshua Ilustre was born in Tamuning, Guam on January 23, 1994.
 * "Ilustre graduated from George Washington High School." - Wikilink George Washington High School to George Washington High School (Guam)
 * Do the same with walk-on which should be linked to Walk-on (sports)
 * "achieving summa cum laude." - Have no knowledge of what "summa cum laude" means but link it to Latin honors to aid those unfamiliar with the phrase

2016 Summer Olympics

 * Wikilink Guam Track & Field Association and universality slots to Wild card (sports)
 * "Ilustre ran the 800 m in Rio." - Better: Ilustre ran the 800 metres in Rio de Janeiro. and add which heat he ran in
 * "Since he finished last in his heat, it would not have made a difference in the event if he was not disqualified," - try this: Since Ilustre finished last in his heat, there would have been no change in circumstances had he not been disqualified,

Post-Olympics

 * "He returned to Portland to work as a medical transcriptionist," Ilustre returned to Portlant to work as a medical transcriptionist,