Talk:Josiane Lima/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 10:22, 3 April 2023 (UTC)

I'll take a look over this. Harrias (he/him) • talk 10:22, 3 April 2023 (UTC)

Images

 * 6a. Symbol confirmed.svg None present.
 * 6b. Symbol confirmed.svg None present.

Prose

 * 1a. Symbol question.svg A few queries below, but nothing major.
 * Consider linking "sculls" to Sculling on first use.
 * ✅ Added a simple mention with link; I considered adding it to text already present but "double sculls"/"single sculls" are the proper names of events, so the link feels improper (breaking up the name and linking to the motion rather than event). Kingsif (talk) 22:20, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * "..at the Olympic lane.." What does this mean?
 * The rowing equivalent of an Olympic pool. Would "Olympic rowing lane" be clearer? Kingsif (talk) 22:20, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * "This medal led to them being described as ones to watch ahead of the Rio 2016 Summer Paralympics, held in Brazil, by World Rowing." I'm not keen on the "by World Rowing" tacked on at the end here, it feels awkward. Maybe something like: "This medal led to them being described by World Rowing as ones to watch ahead of the Rio 2016 Summer Paralympics, held in Brazil."


 * "..to win the small final." What is a small final?
 * A race to place the teams who do not make the final, in events where overall placement is important. Fairly common across sports that have world rankings or qualifying positions (rather than times), there might be a wiktionary entry to link but I doubt it. Kingsif (talk) 22:20, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
 * I added a Wiktionary link, with which I'm happy to pass this. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 10:38, 7 April 2023 (UTC)


 * "..as well as politicians in Brazil since the crisis in 2015.." What crisis in 2015?
 * ✅ Added a wikilink. Kingsif (talk) 22:20, 4 April 2023 (UTC)


 * 1b. Symbol confirmed.svg No relevant MOS issues.


 * 3a. Symbol confirmed.svg No apparent significant gaps.
 * 3b. Symbol confirmed.svg The article follows a suitable summary style, without going into excessive depth.
 * 4. Symbol confirmed.svg No issues.
 * 5. Symbol confirmed.svg No issues.

Overall a good piece of work. A few issues above, although nothing major. I'll stick it on hold. Harrias (he/him) • talk 11:10, 3 April 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review, I've addressed everything either - some with responses here. Kingsif (talk) 22:21, 4 April 2023 (UTC)