Talk:Jovan Grković-Gapon

B-Class Assessment Tips
Hi, good work so far. Per request at WP:MHA, I have reviewed the article and have the following suggestions:
 * it is best to avoid using interchangable proper nouns, e.g Grković and Gapon, as this can confuse some readers;
 * Possibly split the life section into his early life, war experience/ death
 * for a B class rating, all information needs to be covered by an inline citation. This can be done by adding one at the end of the paragraph if everything came from the one source, or if multiple sources are used, multiple in line citations should be added where necessary (even in the body of the paragraph for individual sentences);
 * Avoid unsupported attributions WP:WEASEL like "Unusually combative and revolutionary for being a former monk"
 * Although not required, relevant images are always a nice addition to any article

--Molestash (talk) 17:21, 5 January 2014 (UTC)