Talk:Joy Mangano/Archives/2016

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Requests for cleanup, claiming "promotional" and "advert"
I find that these claims:
 * for the article:

which appears as:


 * and for the section "Other products":

which appears as:

have no merit. However, before removing them, I'd like to discuss them and listen to anybody's reasons, so that we can improve the article together.

yoyo (talk) 01:37, 3 January 2016 (UTC)
 * I've replaced the "environmentally friendly" claim for GreenPan cookware with a direct, attributed quote from the press release about how its lack of PTFE and PFOA "makes it 'green' in manufacturing". I think this is an improvement - it's more specific and less emotionally laden; with even the press release placing "green" in quotes, thus weakening the claim.   However, I do appreciate that a press release is not the best or most disinterested source, and would welcome any improvements.  yoyo (talk) 02:14, 3 January 2016 (UTC)
 * I just changed the format of stuff and her personal life. I did not change any of the articles clean-up sections. I have no objections to the article now the way it is except there needs citations for a few claims. - Kiraroshi1976 (talk) 05:17, 3 January 2016 (UTC)
 * I agree that the article now passes scrutiny, and given that there have been no further objections here for months, I've removed both templates. Barte (talk) 20:21, 19 June 2016 (UTC)