Talk:Joyce Borenstein

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Callmepapa. Peer reviewers: Sobaface.

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Hi there, I’ll be doing a peer review of your article for our film class! I think your article is very strong, firstly based off of the fact that you have a lot of good, reliable sources, and secondly because it’s super well written! I especially like that you created an entire separate section to discuss her most well known documentary. One thing I noticed is that your introductory paragraph is a bit on the longer side, especially considering the length of your categories in the main body of your article. Since much of what you mention in the intro seems to be about her nominations and awards, I would suggest maybe taking that information and making a separate “Nominations and Awards” subheading in the main body of your article. Also, your filmography table seems to need a bit of tweaking, as it is a bit hard to read – I will try to help with fixing that! Overall, I think you have a great article! Sobaface (talk) 23:25, 3 November 2016 (UTC)