Talk:Juan Gualberto Gómez/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: SCB '92 11:42, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria Looks okay
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * The lead just repeats "he" in each sentence; needs to be paraphrased with "Gomez" as well; in the main article, it should read the place he was born in (Matanzas Province, Cuba); Havana should be wikilinked when first mentioned; "were African slaves[5] but managed to buy the freedom of their child..." I think "but" should be changed to either "who" or "that";
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * fine
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * fine
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * fine
 * C. No original research:
 * fine
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * Death section should be expanded
 * B. Focused:
 * fine
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * fine
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * fine
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * fine
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * fine
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * I'll pass the article if you fix the issues; and any chance of expanding the "Death" section (like the place of death)?

Okay, it's been a week, and since the nominator failed to address any of the issues, I'm failing it-SCB &#39;92 (talk) 10:27, 29 September 2011 (UTC)