Talk:Jubilee Library, Brighton

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Article tone
I think this article's tone almost a bit like an advertistment. There are too many sentances that seem to flatter and promote the library rather than use enclyclopedic language. I'll have a go to tone down the language a bit.Seaweed (talk) 19:29, 25 July 2022 (UTC)


 * I've proof read and improved the tone, have added in current services of the library (so it isn't fully about the architecture/build) would anyone else like to read through and see if the tone is sufficient enough yet? Rhagfyr (talk) 14:31, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

Excessive reliance on The New Encyclopaedia of Brighton (2010)
I've notied that there are a lot of references in the article that come from the 2010 version of The New Encyclopaedia of Brighton. It doesn't sound like a great idea for Wikipedia to rely on another encylopedia. I won't remove anything unless I can find better, alternative sources.Seaweed (talk) 16:49, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Noted, but EncB is in fact more akin to a secondary source than a conventional teritary source, despite its (unfortunate?) name. Frankly I'm not convinced the work that has been done to this article is wholly necessary, but I will not rock the boat.  (Incidentally any suggestion that the article "advertises" the library makes me smile wryly: I never fail to be disappointed by the poor layout, waste of space and weak selection of books there!)  Hassocks 5489 (Floreat Hova!)  17:42, 26 July 2022 (UTC)