Talk:Judaism in Rugrats/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: liquidluck ✽ talk  23:01, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

Looks good overall, mostly minor grammar concerns. Feel free to argue with me over my suggestions:
 * "...a dynamic passively shown in American animated programming during the series' broadcast run." I'm not sure what this sentence is trying to say.
 * It was barely used in cartoons in America when the series was around.  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * New Where is it referenced in the body? liquidluck ✽ talk  18:05, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The whole first paragraph in "Reception."  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 22:37, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * New I'm not sure why I missed that! Just add the years the program ran, and I'll wrap up here. liquidluck ✽ talk  22:46, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * ✅  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 00:15, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Change "overwhelmingly popular" to "positive" and delete "incredible" and "highly" per WP:WEASEL. Change Conversely to However,
 * ✅  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Rewrite all caps reference titles in standard casing.
 * Assuming you mean ref 1, ✅  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "and parents to" -> "and parents of"
 * ✅  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "respected parents" -> "respective parents"
 * ✅  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "Boris and Minka have orchestrated at their humble abode" -> hosted by Boris and Minka
 * ✅  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "is the story" -> in the story
 * ✅  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "A Rugrats Chanukah," originally aired" -> "which originally aired"
 * ✅  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "in the Rugrats franchise" -> "in other aspects of the Rugrats franchise"
 * ✅  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "as the script did not portray her in a way that she could work with" What does this mean? Stereotypically?
 * The script gave very non-Jewish things for Chartoff to say which didn't exactly portray Minka's personality in a workable way. In her words, "The creators might have been Jews, but the writers clearly weren't."  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * New. Try replacing it with a quote- any quote. liquidluck ✽ talk  18:57, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Done.  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 22:37, 8 April 2010 (UTC)


 * ...when he was penning the teleplay" Did he convert because of the script, or shortly before?
 * Shortly before.  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "Grandparents to anti-Semitic" -> "the characterizations of Boris and Minka were anti-Semeitic"
 * ✅  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

Putting the article on hold until April 12, 2010. Nice work! liquidluck ✽ talk 23:02, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Result
 * Thanks for the review! :D  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Pass. liquidluck ✽ talk  03:22, 9 April 2010 (UTC)