Talk:Judge, Jury, Executioner/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 20:35, 10 March 2012 (UTC)

Issues:
 * Picture: Give a better rationale for the screenshot
 * Should be good now.
 * Intro: Explain what Carl's actions are
 * Plot: "who commends him for his efforts despitedespite having different views" remove one of the 'despite'
 * Plot: "He later proposes that he will to protest against the group if the member have the views." What does this mean? Please re-word
 * Ratings: Explain what the Nielsen ratings means
 * Plot: "He later proposes that he will to protest against the group if the member have the views." What does this mean? Please re-word
 * Ratings: Explain what the Nielsen ratings means
 * Ratings: Explain what the Nielsen ratings means

That's all! On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 21:08, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Should be ready to go now! —DAP388 (talk) 01:45, 11 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good, I pass!--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:02, 11 March 2012 (UTC)

Well done! - Another Believer ( Talk ) 18:57, 11 March 2012 (UTC)