Talk:Judy Johnson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:04, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

Am going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 17:04, 17 November 2017 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Early life

 * "William Julius Johnson was born in 1899 in Snow Hill, Maryland to William Henry Johnson," - use Johnson's full birth date in the prose
 * "Johnson had an older sister Mary Emma and younger brother John" - and a younger brother John
 * Wikilink sandlot ball

The Hilldale Daisies

 * Use the Template:Convert template on 155 lbs so it is also shown in kilograms
 * Inside the park home run is a redirect links that need attention to

The 1930s

 * "The team secured the first half championship" - The team secured the first half of the championship
 * "and keep Pittsburgh's pennant hopes alive." - kept

Later life and legacy

 * Fix the redirect for Baseball Hall of Fame