Talk:Juliana Laffitte

Shannon's Peer Review
Hello Arjun, Your article is solid, straight to the bases and right to the point. It provides all the information needed to know about her, and I think it's pretty good as it is!

The only thing that I noticed is that you don't have a lead on the top of the wiki page! If you look at other articles on the top of the their page, it starts off with their name bolded and then includes a brief small snippet of who and what the person does. It also includes one little detail that the person is known for!

I also see that in the collections, you didn't quite finish your sentence about the "Red Series," and that's okay! There's all the time you need to continue to add onto your wiki page! Aside from that however, your wiki-article is well organized, and provides all the information that professor asked for! Great job, and keep up the good work!

-- Updated May 15, 2019

I was looking over your article again and I was checking the links, and I saw that your first reference ( Gorrell, Michael Gorrell (2011). "E-books on EBSCOhost: Combining NetLibrary E-books with the EBSCOhost Platform". Information Standards Quarterly. 23 (2): 31. doi:10.3789/isqv23n2.2011.07. ISSN 1041-0031.) leads me straight to a unknown page, I'm not sure if it's because it is an ebook, but just wanted to let you know!

You can also move your references list on the very bottom of your article to the "References" heading, but clicking on insert>more>references list, just make sure that click below the references list first so that it pops up there!

Also, I would suggest to include some more artworks and include more objective descriptions and information before the artwork that you've included so far!

Somb001 (talk) 02:13, 15 May 2019 (UTC)