Talk:Julianna Barwick

Help for editing the article(examples please)?
I'd like to try to improve the article but I'm having some problems figuring out how to make it "not news". Could someone please give an example of where the article falls short? I'll be happy to take it from there but I'm not sure what I'm looking for. Cassius235 (talk) 19:24, 1 April 2014 (UTC)