Talk:Julio and Marisol/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:32, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:32, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Non-free use rationale looks good.
 * "Story line" should be "Storyline"
 * "which ran" "that ran"
 * Always [re]cite sources for quotes.
 * "she's" "she is" (MOS:CONTRACTIONS)
 * Remove the comma after "told Julio".
 * Remove the comma after "another day".
 * "a HIV counselor" "an HIV counselor"
 * "a HIV test" "an HIV test"
 * "late 1980's" "late 1980s"
 * "Use of condoms" "The use of condoms"
 * a "HIV melodrama" an "HIV melodrama"
 * Remove the comma after "returned in 1997".
 * Done with all that (except for making sure all the quotes are properly cited) got those now.


 * Sources
 * Avoid using quotation marks in citations (WP:QWQ).
 * I'm not seeing any places I did this incorrectly. Could you be more specific?
 * Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:06, 17 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Add the "use mdy dates" template to fix citations (WP:BADDATE).
 * Done


 * Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark references from New York Magazine with "|url-access=subscription".
 * Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark references from The Washington Post with "|url-access=limited".
 * Added all those


 * Newspaper.com sources should link to a clipping, not the newspaper title.
 * Hmmm, my newspapers.com subscription seems to have expired. I'll get back to you when I've got that sorted out.
 * Added a link. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:06, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks!


 * Optional, but try archiving sources (you can use this tool).
 * Done. I hadn't known about that tool.  Very nice!


 * OK, I think I've got everything. I would be remiss if I didn't acknowledge the assistance of, whose extensive peer review comments were invaluable for me getting this into shape.  -- RoySmith (talk) 23:10, 17 June 2021 (UTC)