Talk:Juma Santos

Tone
Nice work - but a couple of things need fixing. One is that it's written in a style more suitable for a press release or a bio on an artist's own website. Wikipedia style is to be a little "drier" - see Airto Moreira for a similar percussionist, or Miles Davis, of course. The other thing is it's missing the right sort of introduction - name of the artist in bold, date and place of birth, etc. I may come back to this myself. --ajn (talk) 05:51, 22 May 2006 (UTC)

Age at death
If he was born in '48 and died in '07, he was either 58 or 59 at time of death, not 61 as stated.  tomasz.  22:20, 26 February 2012 (UTC)