Talk:Jun (drink)

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Overly Positive & Non-Encyclopaedic tone.
Regarding the opening paragraph, the sentence ending in Source 7 feels as if it is overly positive about Jun and seems to give the impression of an endorsement. This would go against the Encyclopaedic tone of Wikipedia. Lamb104 (talk) 16:00, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes, I agree, especially since the health benefits of honey are non-specific and minor, and any purported health benefits stemming from green tea consumption are not strongly supported either, to my knowledge. Revirvlkodlaku (talk) 16:51, 25 January 2021 (UTC)