Talk:June Werner

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COI: As per my user profile I am the bother-in-law of "June Werner".

I have previously authored an article successfully that was also subject to COI consideration: "Oswald Werner".

Bernardwerner (talk) 16:21, 12 July 2020 (UTC)


 * Thank you for declaring. The article's tone does have several signs of it being written by someone close to her, and it needs to be made much more neutral. Multiple phrases such as "She is remembered for core advocacies ... of social justice", "This led to a goal in life", "compassion for the less fortunate was ingrained into her life", "Werner impacted health care at all levels" need to be removed. The paragraph "Mentoring was also a step towards" is synthesising unrelated published material (original research).  – Thjarkur (talk) 12:49, 14 July 2020 (UTC)