Talk:Junko Tabei/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 20:05, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

An important article and well-written too. Posting my comments soon :) Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 20:05, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

Once again, apologies for the delay. A nice, well-written article. Here are all my comments: Sainsf  ·  (How ya doin'?)  05:55, 2 May 2020 (UTC)


 * General
 * No duplinks, dablinks, broken external links, copyvio issues
 * Sourcing: Looks decent and reliable on the whole but this is the first time I'm seeing Britannica as a source. Not sure if one encyclopedia should go for another which is also publicly edited.
 * Encyclopedia Britannica does accept some submissions from the public, but it's maintained and edited by an editorial team, and as far as I know it's still considered an acceptable source. Alanna the Brave (talk) 18:45, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for letting me know. Sainsf  ·  (How ya doin'?)  10:25, 9 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Citations: Fine overall but a few things could be improved:
 * Any authors for ref 2?
 * Not that I found, but this was actually the one source I couldn't access to properly check out. I've replaced it with a link to a different online article from the AAJ.
 * Book titles should usually be in title case
 * Fixed.
 * "NPR.org" can simply and more readably written as "NPR". Similarly Google.com and others
 * Fixed.
 * Accessdate for ref10?
 * Fixed.
 * Not sure we need ISSN for a newspaper like NYT
 * It may not be necessary, but it doesn't do any harm -- unless you have strong feelings about it, I think I'll leave it there.
 * In ref 14 "Condé Nast Traveller India" isn't part of the title
 * Fixed. Not sure how I missed that one. :-)


 * Prose and coverage
 * What exactly is ref 1 the source for in the lead? Is it something not in the main text?
 * Removed.


 * located between Nepal and China Is it necessary to say this?
 * Probably not -- removed.


 * In 2019, a mountain range on Pluto was named Tabei Montes in her honour. It seems like a random example from among the honors listed for her.
 * I've only listed three honours in the article for now, and the mountain range seemed like the most significant item to me. I think she received some other medals and honours (according to her personal website), but I haven't been able to find good sources to back that up. I'll keep working on it.


 * There should be no period in the Mt Nasu pic per WP:CAPFRAG
 * Fixed.


 * Introduce Hiroko Hirakawa
 * Done.


 * Use a convert template for 6,300 meters
 * Hmm... I didn't even know that template existed! Thanks for that -- I've added it now.


 * Link altitude sickness
 * Done.


 * team leader Eiko Hisano Here you can say just Hisano
 * Done.


 * climbing the highest mountain on each continent Maybe the following list should contain Puncak Jaya for completeness instead of mentioning it in the next line.
 * I've edited both sentences. How does it look now? Alanna the Brave (talk) 18:45, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Lots better. Sainsf  ·  (How ya doin'?)  10:25, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

All points have been dealt with, and the article meets all GA criteria in my opinion. Promoted :) Sainsf  ·  (How ya doin'?)  10:25, 9 May 2020 (UTC)