Talk:Juno Frankie Pierce

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Feedback and further improvements
Hi I have some feedback for further improvements!
 * I think the background section should be restructured. Instead of having the section "Background" with subsections for both "Early life" and "Education" (both of which are quite short), I think the section should be retitled "Early life and education" and the subsections should be removed.
 * You can add some links, such as linking to Robert Allen (Tennessee). I like to have at least one link per paragraph, and sometimes many more than that!
 * In the early life section, it doesn't say where she was born. Was she born in Tennessee? It might be nice if you can find a source to add this content, as it is a pretty standard part of a biography
 * This sentence lacks a citation: Pierce served as the school's superintendent from its founding through 1939, and was followed by Mattie E. Coleman until Coleman's death in 1942.
 * I see the reference The Woman's Hour has been cited multiple times for multiple page numbers (or sometimes the same number, such as reference 7 and 16. To reuse a reference that is the exact same, go into edit mode, put your cursor where you want to put the reused citation, then click "cite". Within the popup box, click the "reuse" tab. There, you'll be able to see reference already in use in the article.
 * There is some content in the lead that is not present in the body of the article. The lead is supposed to be a synopsis of the rest of the article, so it shouldn't contain any unique information. However, it states that The school continued to operate until 1979, a fate not mentioned in the body of the article. There is also no mention in the body of the article that her niece was Nellie Griswold Francis.

Let me know if you have questions about any of this feedback! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:30, 25 July 2019 (UTC)