Talk:Justify My Love/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:31, 12 April 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

This will run over the course of two days; you deserve it after three months in the queue! --K. Peake 06:31, 12 April 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Remove house from genres since that is only a groove, move refs to only being in the body where you still need to write out trip hop in comp and linked to itself, replace commas with bullet points per Template:Infobox song and add experimental pop per the body
 * "Kravitz also produced the song" → "Kravitz also handled the production"
 * "from The Immaculate Collection on" → "from the album on"
 * Why is there no comma before dance like in the body? Also, you need to mention trip hop here too.
 * "Madonna and was described as a "spoken-word ode to releasing your" → "Madonna as she releases "your" to be less repetitve
 * Finland and Italy positions need to be written out in prose
 * "Netherlands, Switzerland and" → "the Netherlands, Switzerland, and" plus the above applies here
 * "to be certified multiplatinum" → "to be certified multiplatinum in the US"
 * "Ashanti and Jay-Z." → "Ashanti, and Jay-Z."
 * Maybe find another sentence you can add to the fourth para since it is a little short?
 * I tried but I couldn't :/ Alex reach me! 00:33, 29 April 2023 (UTC)

Background and release

 * Pipe greatest hits to Greatest hits album
 * Are you sure relegated is the appropriate term here?
 * "of her career which" → "of her career, which"
 * "the project aimed to be released in time" → "the project, aiming to release in time"
 * Change "public's interest" to either "the public's interest" or "public interest", as it does not read right currently.
 * Remove the United States since the source does not specify any countries whatsoever
 * "It was issued on the United Kingdom" → "It was issued in the UK"
 * "a aggressive expression on her face and a" → "an aggressive expression, on her face and a"

Development

 * Img looks good!
 * "her over a studio" → "her over to a studio"
 * "that she would receive 12,5%" → "that she would receive 12.5%"
 * "signed the paper, and was then" → "signed the paper and was then"
 * "Kravitz recalls that" → "Kravitz recalled that"
 * "where he played" → "where Kravitz played"
 * "Madonna agreed to record the song, and both started working on the track" → "Madonna agreed on recording, and both started working on it"

Composition

 * Is the usage of "and" to separate that they recorded in those two studios or recordings were by different personnel in them?
 * Recorded in those two studios by the same personnel as per the album's liner notes Alex reach me! 00:33, 29 April 2023 (UTC)


 * "it at Sterling Sound Studios," → "the song at Sterling Sound Studios,"
 * "The mixing of "Justify My Love" was done in QSound which" → "The mixing was done in QSound, which"
 * Audio sample looks good!
 * Remove wikilink on beats per minute
 * Wikilink vocal range
 * Add trip hop here since this is where the other genres are
 * "and "moaning" background vocals by Kravitz." → "and Kravitz's "moans" on background vocals." or something similar per the source
 * "breathing vocals initially punctuates the" → "breathing vocals initially punctuate the"
 * Pipe double-tracked to Double tracking
 * I am confused why [24] is invoked on the audio sample but not here when they use the same info?
 * "described its composition as" → "described the composition as"
 * "and pointed out that Madonna deserved" → "and pointed out that Madonna deserves" plus this sentence is fine staying here once the genre is mentioned in the previous para, as it is giving a more detailed description

"The Beast Within"

 * Pipe Eastern music to Music of Asia
 * "a powerful tool to bigots."" → "a powerful tool to bigots"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "He also commented that" → "He also commented,"
 * "in general" and "the song is, after all, about love"." → "in general": "The song is, after all, about love."" per this being a full sentence
 * "The rabbi responded that" → "The rabbi replied that" to be less repetitive
 * The ref should be invoked at the end of both of the last two sentences per them using quotes

Critical response

 * Mention how many critics made these comparisons on the img text
 * "stated that it was a" → "stated that the song was a"
 * "Chuck Campbell from The Knoxville News-Sentinel said" → "Chuck Campbell from the Knoxville News-Sentinel said"
 * "sound like nursery rhymes."" → "sound like nursery rhymes"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * Any sentences using direct quotes should have the refs invoked when it is for the same review
 * Which review do you refer to here? Alex reach me! 00:33, 29 April 2023 (UTC)


 * "For Tony Power of Blender the song was "preposterously sexy", and" → "For Tony Power of Blender, the song was "preposterously sexy", and he"
 * "Madonna had released before."" → "Madonna had released before"."
 * "to transform and provoke."" → "to transform and provoke"."

Chart performance

 * Img looks good!
 * "In the United States, "Justify My Love"" → "In the US, "Justify My Love"" per MOS:US
 * "Eight weeks later it reached number one, becoming her" → "Eight weeks later, the song reached number one, becoming Madonna's"
 * Pipe Hot Dance Club Songs to Dance Club Songs
 * Mention that the certification was in the US
 * "debuted on the ARIA Charts at number 14 on" → "debuted at number 14 on the ARIA Charts on"
 * "The next weeks it peaked at" → "The next weeks, it peaked at"
 * "had a similar run as in Australia, by debuting at" → "had a similar run as to Australia, debuting at"
 * Pipe RIANZ Singles Chart to Recorded Music NZ
 * "In the United Kingdom, the track" → "In the UK, the track"
 * Mention the date of the BPI certification, the amount of shipments and the country
 * "in the United Kingdom" → "in the UK"
 * "eventually peaking at number ten" → "eventually peaking at number 10" per MOS:NUM
 * "and reached number eight." → "later reaching number eight."
 * "In Switzerland it experienced" → "In Switzerland, it experienced"
 * "Its commercial performance in" → "The song's commercial performance in"

Development

 * Img looks good!
 * "The accompanying music video for" → "The music video for"
 * "directed the video for" → "directed the video for Madonna's"
 * "by Oliver Gajan, and" → "by Oliver Gajan and"
 * "then-boyfriend, Tony Ward, models Amanda Cazalet and Wallis Franken Montana, as well as" → "then-boyfriend Tony Ward, fellow models Amanda Cazalet and Wallis Franken Montana, and"
 * "for three days," → "for three days and two nights," per the source
 * "that by the end of it he was" → "that by the end of it, he was"
 * [94] should be invoked after the sentence that uses direct quotes also
 * "was a dream, and not a" → "was a dream rather than a"

Synopsis

 * Moving img looks good!
 * I understand WP:TVPLOT, but shouldn't there at least be one ref here?
 * Pipe grainy to Visual snow syndrome
 * "as it cuts to Madonna" → "cutting to Madonna"
 * "garter belt and stockings." → "garter belt, and stockings."
 * "As she stands," → "As Madonna stands,"
 * Shouldn't there be a comma before the crossdresser part?

Release and banning

 * "they couldn't air it"." → "they couldn't air it."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
 * "also said in a statement:" → "also said in a statement,"
 * Remove wikilink on Abbey Konowitch
 * ""Oh Father" (1989) and" → ""Oh Father" (1989), and"
 * [10] should be invoked after any sentences using direct quotes
 * "rejected it completely"." → "rejected it completely.""
 * "we would air it",[98] sparking" → "we would air it."[98] This sparked" to avoid a run-on
 * "to be a problem"." → "to be a problem."" on the quote box
 * Wikilink Nightline to itself
 * "humiliation and degradation"." → "humiliation and degradation."" if this is a full sentence quoted
 * "such as Saturday Night Live" → "such as Saturday Night Live (SNL)" per this appearing later on in the article
 * Pipe MuuchMusic to Much (TV channel)
 * Pipe Musique Plus to Elle Fictions
 * "the latter's program dicrector" → "the latter's program director"
 * "called it a" → "called the video a"
 * "In the United Kingdom the video" → "In the UK, the video"
 * "as it is a" → "due to being a"
 * Where is the late at night part sourced?
 * "in the United States;" → "in the US;" per MOS:US
 * "so lucky me"." → "so lucky me.""
 * [98] is redundant for the video single chart performance
 * "in the United States," → "in the US,"

Reception and analysis

 * Img looks good!
 * Pipe feminist to Feminism, also why isn't this done on the first instance instead?
 * Any sentences using direct quotes should have refs invoked
 * "She also noted that who" → "She also noted those who"
 * "Madonna, before YouTube."" → "Madonna, before YouTube"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "popularized by MTV."" → "popularized by MTV"." per above
 * "she considered that Madonna was a" → "she considered Madonna as a"
 * "the accepted norms". should have punctuation inside the quotation marks if it is a full sentence
 * Ditto for "rather than foundationally".
 * "serve her interests."" → "serve her interests"."
 * Remove wikilink on George Michael
 * "similar thematic territory but was" → "similar thematic territory, but was"
 * Pipe around the age of twenty to Millennials

Live performances

 * Img looks good!
 * Pipe period costume to Historical drama
 * "New York Daily News Jim Farber" → "The New York Daily News Jim Farber"
 * "expectations that the performance for the song would be" → "expectations that the performance would be" to be less wordy
 * None of "The Beast Within" performance is backed up by the following ref; invoke one here if it is already sourced to a citation
 * "The Beast Within" is referred to as "Book of Revelations" on The New York Times ref Alex reach me! 00:33, 29 April 2023 (UTC)


 * "released on VHS and Laserdisc" → "released on VHS and LaserDisc" with the wikilink
 * "from her exhibition in collaboration with Steven Klein, X-STaTIC Pro=CeSS," → "from her exhibition X-STaTIC Pro=CeSS in collaboration with Steven Klein,"
 * "and live album," → "and live album" with the wikilink
 * Any sentences using direct quotes need the ref(s) invoked at the end
 * Remove wikilink on MDNA World Tour
 * "as dancers writhe on" → "as dancers writhed on"
 * Remove overly obvious wikilink on Sydney
 * Pipe Allphones Arena to Sydney SuperDome

Usage in media, covers and samples

 * "guest appearance on Saturday Night Live" → "guest appearance on SNL"
 * "It consisted on" → "The spoof consisted of"
 * "to which Madonna says" → "to which Madonna says,"
 * Wikilink compilation album
 * The second tribute album release is not sourced as including the song
 * Pipe Maxx to Maxx (group)
 * "a part of its remixes" → "a part of the song's remixes"

Credits and personnel

 * Change the sub-sections to sub-headings
 * Pipe background vocals to Backing vocalist

Track listings and formats

 * [167][168][169][170][171] is too many refs together; move them next to the appropriate releases
 * Pipe Q-Sound to QSound

Weekly charts

 * Pipe Íslenski Listinn Topp to Music of Iceland
 * Add Cash Box in brackets for the top 100

Year-end charts

 * Good

Certifications and sales

 * Good

Book sources

 * Pipe Cooper Square Press to Rowman & Littlefield
 * Wikilink Billboard books per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * Why is the first instance of Omnibus Press not piped to Wise Music Group?
 * Pipe Westview Press to Taylor & Francis
 * Wikilink Simon & Schuster

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; that went smoothly over the expected timeframe! --K. Peake 10:34, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Pinging the nominator:, since the review has been going on for 11 days, and most of the issues aren't fixed. — VAUGHAN J.  ( TALK ) 22:05, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, and my apologies for the late response; I'll be starting tomorrow. Alex reach me! 21:33, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ thanks again for the review! Alex reach me! 00:33, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for covering my points, however there are some issues that you missed. The spoken-word ode part in the lead needs to be reworded how I suggested, [24] should be invoked in the prose as well as on the sample and my comments about re-invoking refs refer to any sentences using direct quotes. --K. Peake 09:17, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅, wasn't the [24] ref (now [22]) already invoked in prose as well on the sample? Alex reach me! 20:26, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, no issues are remaining! --K. Peake 06:59, 2 May 2023 (UTC)