Talk:Justin Boren/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil  (T • C • I love Wikipedia!)  03:42, 12 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Honor roll is a disambiguation page.
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 23:11, 12 February 2011 (UTC)


 * There's one dead link according to.
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:59, 13 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Add a comma between "28" and "with" in "On October 28 with Riley still injured".
 * Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 23:18, 12 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Please spell NCAA out fully.in "the end of the NCAA-sanction".
 * Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 23:20, 12 February 2011 (UTC)


 * "In spring practice Boren impressed his coaches and teammates,[67][68] however he refused all interview requests." Shouldn't that be "During spring practice"? Replace the comma with a semi colon and add a comma after "however" instead.
 * O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:31, 13 February 2011 (UTC)


 * Hyphenate "second year".
 * O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:34, 13 February 2011 (UTC)
 * "Boren missed the October 31st". Please change the ordinal number to a cardinal no.
 * O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:32, 13 February 2011 (UTC)


 * Shouldn't the subheading "Personal" be "Personal life"?
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:35, 13 February 2011 (UTC)


 * Is the subheading "College" really mean "Career"? I'm guessing that playing collage football is not a career, but a past-time, am I right? Please forgive my lack of knowledge about American football, since I live in Melbourne, Australia.
 * I tried to change it to College career.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:39, 13 February 2011 (UTC)


 * There's no alt text for the image files. See WP:ALT.
 * Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:04, 13 February 2011 (UTC)

I'm satisfied with the writing. With a few minor changes, I'm happy to past this article. Sp33dyphil (T • C • I love Wikipedia!)  04:00, 12 February 2011 (UTC)