Talk:Justin I/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
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 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a   ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   : "Gibbon, Edward, The History of the Decline and Fall of the Roman Empire, vol. 4, chapter xl." is dead.
 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
 * was an Eastern Roman Emperor from 518 to 527. He rose through the ranks of the army to become commander of the imperial guard. suggest change an to the
 * Done.


 * which in turn meant that Justin enjoyed good relations with the papacy. suggest:
 * resulting in good relations between Justin and the papacy.
 * Done.


 * He was of Thraco-Roman[3][4] or Illyro-Roman stock suggest:
 * He was of either of Thraco-Roman or Illyro-Roman descent (stock is perfectly valid, but descent is more understood by layman, IMHO.)
 * Done.


 * By morning the event had been announced throughout the capital, Constantinople suggest:
 * By morning the event had been announced throughout Constantinople, the capital of the Eastern Roman Empire.
 * Done, but at first mention of Constantinople.


 * The original Euphemia was a Christian martyr during the Diocletianic Persecution. suggest:
 * Her namesake was a Christian martyr during the Diocletianic Persecution.
 * Not done. I just prefer the original wording.


 * A number of small states on the borders of the Byzantine Empire and of Sassanian Persia were constant bones of contention between the two powers. suggest changing bones to points
 * Changed to "areas".


 * He did not succeed in having the edict overturned, it seems that he did not press the matter. suggest:
 * Although he did not succeed in having the edict overturned, he did not press the matter.
 * Not done. I read this as a modern historians supposition rather than an established fact, so I am deliberately being a bit wooly.


 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  15:55, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Good suggestions one and all. Thank you. Gog the Mild (talk) 20:07, 29 August 2018 (UTC)