Talk:Justynian Szczytt (d. 1677)

B-class review for WP:POLAND
Few things could be expanded on:
 * "who spent 15 years in Moscow's captivity" - why?
 * There is no mention in my sources about the reason. Kmicic (talk) 20:40, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
 * we know nothing of his education, youth, date and place of birth? If so, say this in the opening section, and reference it (or if nobody says so directly, note that "... and none of he biographies of him discuss it" or something along those lines;
 * Done. Kmicic (talk) 20:40, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
 * Sapieha House - not a term e really use, change it to magnate Sapieha family
 * Done. Kmicic (talk) 20:40, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
 * "giving new king a sabre" - sabre? Not szabla?
 * Yes, szabla. Done Kmicic (talk) 20:40, 17 March 2012 (UTC)

Technical:
 * on English Wikipedia, unlike on Polish one, references go AFTER the stop sign, not before. Please ensure all citations are following that rule.
 * Done Kmicic (talk) 20:40, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
 * why is "Election Sejm" sometimes capitalized, and sometimes not? Be consistent, please.
 * I've changed all to capitalized version. Kmicic (talk) 20:40, 17 March 2012 (UTC)

Language: --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; talk to me 20:54, 16 December 2011 (UTC)
 * there are numerous issues with grammar/word choice, I fixed a few but more remain. This the biggest problem of the article, and sadly, not one I can fix: even if I could fix some issues, my articles always need more assistance due to language for GA+ levels, so it's pointless to rely on my help here. This will need a native speaker copyedit before GA, or even B. I'd recommend asking User:Nihil novi, he may be interested in this subject.

Clarification needed
I added clarify tags in a few places where the article wasn't clear:


 * Krzysztof Szczytt, owner of Biała What is Biała, a village? How did Szczytt own a village? Also, it's spelled Białe later in the article. Which is the correct spelling?
 * extraordinary parliament What is this? There are links that help explain coronation sejm and election sejm, but extraordinary parliament and abdication sejm are undefined and have no Wikipedia articles. The article says the abdication sejm met after the king abdicated, so it makes it a little clear, but what is an extraordinary parliament?
 * Szczytt had the following villages What does it mean to say he had the villages? Was he ruler over them?
 * He also had as pawn the following villages Same question: What does that mean?

Thanks. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 19:48, 11 April 2012 (UTC)

Biała was my mistake, it should be Białe. Extraordinary parlaimant was a special parliament which was convened e.g. in danger of war, etc. Szczytt was an owner. Pawn wasn't the best word, I exchanged this for a lien. Thanks! Kmicic (talk) 15:24, 3 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Few final things:
 * add Polish name for "Justice Szczytt"
 * clarify banishment: who issued it, was it pl:banicja, was it retracted?
 * link places in estate part, villages and such are notable. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 00:13, 4 March 2013 (UTC)

I hope that I've corrected everything :) Kmicic (talk) 18:47, 14 March 2013 (UTC)
 * All right, B-class, will need more work for GA (identify proper English names for nameplaces...). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 09:15, 20 March 2013 (UTC)