Talk:Juuse Saros/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 01:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I will complete this review by the end of this week. -Riley1012 (talk) 01:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)

1. Well-written
 * Consider breaking up the Becoming the starter (2018–present) even further because it is currently quite long. Maybe 2021-present can be another subsection with a title like Starter (2021-present)
 * do you think I should just break it up by year? I have seen that done before (see Mitch Marner). HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 12:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
 * That works for me. Let me know when this is done, and I'll pass the article. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:27, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
 * done! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 23:14, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Per MOS:ALLCAPS, could the references with all-caps titles (6, 14, 49, and 52) be changed? ✅
 * Saros played his entire youth career and first three professional seasons with hometown club... Add "his" before "hometown" ✅
 * He finished his rookie season with a 17–10–2 record, a 2.62 goals against average, a .915 save percentage. Add "and" before "a .915 save percentage" ✅
 * He began the season as the steadfast backup to Rinne but they transitioned into an even split rather than starter/backup roles as the season continued. Add a comma after "Rinne" ✅
 * Saros finished in fourth place with two first place votes, two second place votes, and eight third place votes. Add a hyphen for first/second/third-place votes. ✅

2. Verifiable Earwig's Copyvio check passed. Sources are all reliable.
 * Ref 39 needs |publisher=National Hockey League in the citation template ✅
 * There should be consistency in the references on whether it's Sportsnet.ca or Sportsnet ✅
 * Are there sources for the Career Statistics section?
 * At the bottom of the article in external sources it says Biographical information and career statistics from.... HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 12:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Spot check:
 * No issues: 1, 3, 6, 10, 15, 16, 21, 26, 35, 43, 50, 60, 68, 78, 81, 91, 100, 107

3. Broad
 * The 2016 IIHF World Championship should be discussed in the body since it's mentioned in the lead ✅
 * Is there anything else of note that could be added to the Personal life section? I noticed in ref. 3 that he has an older brother that could be mentioned. ✅

4. Neutral The article is neutral.

5. Stable This article is stable day-to-day.

6. Illustrated The images in the article are free and have relevant captions.

Nice article, just a few things that need to be addressed. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:57, 26 March 2024 (UTC)