Talk:K'Andre Miller/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 02:41, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

Lead

 * Change "whom" to "which"
 * Done.

Early life

 * Does (MLB) need to be included if it is not to be mentioned again in the page? The other acronym recitations make sense, as they are repeated later.
 * It does not, good catch.

Playing career

 * Remove comma after "team rules"
 * Done and moved ref to the end of the sentence.
 * Remove comma after "7 seconds of ice time per game"
 * Done.

International play

 * "Miller has represented" — likely should be past tense
 * Done.

Personal life

 * Remove comma after "throughout his hockey career"
 * Done.

Awards and honours

 * It would be more appropriate in this case to use American English for the header.
 * Whoops, you're right!

Other items

 * Earwig catches organization names and recitations of stats, e.g. three goals and 14 assists for 17 points. Not a major issue.
 * The lone image on the page is freely licensed, though it is missing a alt tag.
 * Only part of the FA criteria, but added anyway. I am admittedly not great at alt text.
 * References are archived.
 * No BLP violations.

Summary
Just needs a few copy changes, the type that fresh eyes after nearly two months can catch. Putting on hold; ping when revised. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:54, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Changes addressed, thank you! —  Ghost River  03:14, 30 January 2022 (UTC)