Talk:Käraste Bröder Systrar och Vänner/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:07, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

Another review for you! --K. Peake 17:07, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi, I'll have limited availability for a little while now. Should be able to respond to most items! Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:26, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Why is the cello instrument not sourced in the body?
 * It's sourced in the table. I've added it to Lyrics, where Bellman is the source.
 * "The epistle is dedicated" → "The epistle is subtitled"
 * Edited.
 * The wine setting is not directly sourced in the body
 * Edited, and added to Lyrics.

Background

 * Good

Music and verse form

 * Audio sample looks good!
 * "each of sixteen lines." → "each consisting of sixteen lines."
 * Done.
 * Wikilink tempo
 * Done.

Lyrics

 * Good

Reception and legacy

 * Pipe to Bellman. Biografin should be on "her biography" only
 * Done.
 * "Those form one side" → "These form one side"
 * Done.
 * Merge the Bellman Society para with the above one
 * Done.
 * "where it is" → "on which it is"
 * This is correct in British English.
 * Imgs look good, apart from the part where a full-stop is used after an exclamation mark since this works as the ending punctuation
 * Done.

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; quite a short review this! --K. Peake 19:51, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
 * OK, all done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 20:21, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, another solid job! --K. Peake 07:50, 15 April 2022 (UTC)