Talk:Köllnischer Park/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 14:40, 20 August 2012 (UTC)

Lets see.  TheSpecialUser TSU 14:40, 20 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Acres - please use Convert
 * ✔️: converts 1 hectare to 2.5 acres Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)


 * was redesigned as a public park in 1869–73... - can this be a start of a new sentence?
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)


 *  It is a registered Berlin landmark. - is it possible to fit this in some sentence above to get a good flow?
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Any ref for info in th 1st para of "Location and name" ?
 * It reads of this excellent map, included in the article Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)


 * What is now the site of Köllnischer Park lay in the Middle Ages just outside Cölln. - choose another word instead of "What" if possible. Just sounds odd in the start of a para
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Caption for 1st image in "Attractions"
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Improve caption in "Attractions" section of the other image
 * ✅ Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

 TheSpecialUser TSU 16:24, 21 August 2012 (UTC)