Talk:Kőbánya cellar system/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mdob (talk · contribs) 18:47, 5 March 2018 (UTC)

GA criteria
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 * (b) The lead section is a mess. The first paragraph is way to long (the text after "While intricate ..." should be separated in a new paragraph or better yet, deleted. There are too many citations for the reading to be smooth.
 * . Ok, corrected. The lead section is now in two neat paragraphs.

Mdob (talk) 19:45, 5 March 2018 (UTC) :
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. . : 8 good, small, non-intrusive images Mdob (talk) 19:45, 5 March 2018 (UTC)
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 * (b) subtitle of the image (Anton Dreher Sr. (id. Dréher Antal)) should be changed to something more informative, like "Anton Dreher Sr., austrian brewer, first wine brewer in the Cellar" Mdob (talk) 19:45, 5 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Ok. Corrected. Mdob (talk) 19:13, 17 May 2018 (UTC)


 * Hello! What is the status of this review? Doesn't look like any progress has been made in almost 2 months.-- Dom497 ( talk ) 01:33, 2 May 2018 (UTC)


 * I have fixed the article as good as I could. I hope it gets GA status. Good luck with further work on Wikipedia! --Rev L. Snowfox (talk) 17:34, 14 May 2018 (UTC)