Talk:K-117 (Kansas highway)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:12, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * "11.977-mile-long (19.275 km)" overly precise, suggest nearest 1/100th.
 * -420Traveler (talk) 18:13, 29 August 2021 (UTC)


 * How do I use ref 1 to verify that value?
 * "the state highway system when" link and isn't this normally capitalised?
 * Should it link to Kansas State Highway System?
 * No, my mistake, I was thinking of National Highway System. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:49, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Ok, no problem -420Traveler (talk) 21:48, 29 August 2021 (UTC)


 * "At times sections" I would add a comma after "times".
 * -420Traveler (talk) 21:48, 29 August 2021 (UTC)


 * "to pass through rolling hills. The highway passes" pass/passes repeat.
 * -420Traveler (talk) 21:48, 29 August 2021 (UTC)


 * "-117 is not included in the National Highway System.[6] The National Highway System is a system of highways important to the nation's defense, economy, and mobility. K-117 doesn't connect to the National Highway System either" this is clunky, repetitive and contains a contraction. Needs re-working.  The middle sentence appears to be a footnote really, as well.
 * -420Traveler (talk) 21:48, 29 August 2021 (UTC)


 * "Nebraska southward" comma after Nebraska.
 * -420Traveler (talk) 21:48, 29 August 2021 (UTC)


 * "January 6, 1937 meeting," comma after 1937.
 * -420Traveler (talk) 21:48, 29 August 2021 (UTC)


 * Lots more of those.
 * -420Traveler (talk) 21:48, 29 August 2021 (UTC)


 * " a .5 miles (0.80 km) section" 0.5 mile (use  in the convert template)
 * -420Traveler (talk) 21:48, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

That's all I have on a quick first pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:26, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

I'll promote but can you add a note to ref 1 like I did on the 152 article which tells readers how to use the source please? Cheers. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:04, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
 * I will add the notes. Thanks for adding those notes in, I wasn't exactly sure how to do it properly. Thanks -420Traveler (talk) 19:43, 2 September 2021 (UTC)