Talk:K-170 (Kansas highway)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:58, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

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Lead

 * Add commas after north of Emporia and renumbered to K-99
 * -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

Route description

 * Add a comma after "farmlands" in flat rural farmlands and after about
 * -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add "the" before "Neosho River"
 * -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after After crossing Cable Creek
 * -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Commas after At this point and From this point
 * -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)


 * two lane should be "two lanes"
 * -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Consolidate the two NHS sentences; does the definition need to be in every page if the term is wikilinked?
 * I agree, so I changed it a little, let me know if not ok -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

History

 * K-170 was commissioned as K-70 by 1930, to a highway — unclear what "to" indicates as a preposition here
 * not sure what to change it to? -420Traveler (talk) 04:54, 30 July 2021 (UTC)


 * three state should be hyphenated, maybe with a comma after
 * -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Comma after December 12, 1945 and October 23, 1946 (MOS:DATECOMMA). You can avoid excessive commas by switching "December 12, 1945, resolution," to "resolution on December 12, 1945,".
 * -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Merge the last two sentences
 * Should be fixed now. -420Traveler (talk) 04:45, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

Other notes

 * Use IABot to archive sources.
 * I'm not sure how to use the bot. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Mixed date format in citations. The User:Ohconfucius/script/MOSNUM dates.js date format script will fix this and also catch the GEOCOMMA errors. Consider using it regularly!
 * -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)


 * No images.
 * I checked flickr and there aren't any. Next month I will be travelling through the are and will take and add pictures. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

On hold. Not that much to change. Some of these are things you should consider for all your pages. Not going to go after the "US-XX" format for Kansas since that's a project standards issue as identified earlier. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:12, 30 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Most issues are fixed, just had a couple questions. -420Traveler (talk) 04:59, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , the link to the bot is — check the checkbox. You'll need to authenticate with your Wikipedia account. You can also do a list (say, all Kansas highways) at . I made the other fix; let me know if that works. No images is fine, I was just noting it.  Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 05:12, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , It looks good. Also thanks, I figured out how to use the bot. -420Traveler (talk) 05:31, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
 * It's ready, . Consider going through all your GAs and GANs and archiving the sources. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 16:02, 30 July 2021 (UTC)