Talk:K-33 (Kansas highway)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: EpicPupper (talk · contribs) 22:09, 23 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi there, I'll be reviewing this article over the next few days. This is my first review, so I may take longer to go through the article. Thanks for your patience!

Infobox and lead

 * I've added a short description, please feel free to change as needed.
 * Near the end of the second paragraph, there are a lot of uses of "by", e.g. "By [year] something happened. By [year] something else happened". Consider rewording in order to avoid Proseline, which can make the prose harder to read.
 * I changed it a little, there are a few more remaining. Do you have any suggestions on how to further improve the end of the leads secomd paragraph? -420Traveler (talk) 19:34, 28 January 2022 (UTC)


 * I've added the Created with Inkscape template on the image for the shield in the infobox (File:K-33.svg).
 * The auto trails mention is poorly worded.

Route description

 * I've improved the description for the image used.
 * Thank you -420Traveler (talk) 18:50, 28 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Too many exact distances; please tone them down for readability.
 * -420Traveler (talk) 18:50, 28 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Please remove the mention of the NHS. It's not notable for inclusion. The connection is fine though.
 * I added the explanation as a footnote, will this be ok? -420Traveler (talk) 18:50, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Please fully remove the mention of the NHS. To quote on Talk:K-116 (Kansas highway)/GA1, The NHS mention is still problematic because it's trivial filler and also not verifiable 🐶 EpicPupper (he/him &#124; talk) 05:17, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
 * I know you said to fully remove it, but I changed so it sounds less trivial. But let me know if you still dont like it and I will fully remove it. -420Traveler (talk) 15:42, 17 February 2022 (UTC)


 * KDOT mention: The start of the KDOT sentence is not clear on whether it refers to highways in general, or K-33. Please make an edit similar to the one you did at K-63 (Kansas highway).
 * -420Traveler (talk) 18:50, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Early roads

 * Remove the link to Canada per MOS:OVERLINK and the countries mention. I might be biased, but I think Canada is well-known enough.
 * I agree -420Traveler (talk) 18:51, 28 January 2022 (UTC)


 * The auto trails mention is poorly sourced. Please find WP:RS.
 * -420Traveler (talk) 15:44, 17 February 2022 (UTC)

Designation and realignments

 * More "by [date], by [date], by [date]". Please reword to avoid WP:Proseline. This occurs in all of the 3 paragraphs.
 * Should be all fixed now, let me know if I missed something. -420Traveler (talk) 19:28, 28 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Some cases of years (e.g. 1934 and 1936) can be reworded to "two years later", etc.
 * Should be all fixed now, let me know if I missed something. -420Traveler (talk) 19:28, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Final comments
I fixed almost everything I could, just have a few questions. Thanks -420Traveler (talk) 19:45, 28 January 2022 (UTC)
 * What else needs to be fixed? -420Traveler (talk) 11:52, 7 February 2022 (UTC)
 * I'll need a few more days to take a look at the article. Cheers, 🐶 EpicPupper (he/him &#124; talk) 19:55, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
 * I've added a few more specific comments, but please try to copy edit the article in general. There are numerous places that need some work. To quote here, Please try to take some of this advice and apply it to other articles before nominating them for GAN, as I can see this is a reoccurring issue. 🐶 EpicPupper (he/him &#124; talk) 05:24, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
 * I read through and copy-edited a few things. Tell me specific things that I missed amd needs to be fixed. Thanks -420Traveler (talk) 15:55, 17 February 2022 (UTC)
 * ?? -420Traveler (talk) 16:31, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
 * I've ✅'ed the review. Thank you for your hard work, and please read my comments above. Cheers, 🐶 EpicPupper (he/him &#124; talk) 18:34, 25 February 2022 (UTC)