Talk:K-98 (Kansas highway)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ncchild (talk · contribs) 03:13, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

I gotchu, just give me a little bit until all the I-587 business is sorted out.--Ncchild (talk) 03:13, 23 June 2022 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "and the eastern terminus" would probably be better suited as "and its eastern terminus" but if you think I'm wrong feel free to say so.
 * I agree


 * You stylize the first mention of a U.S. route as (US 54) but every instance later is US-54 or US-56. Is that on purpose?
 * Oops


 * "the highway travels through flat farmland and a two-lane road its entire length." Some sort of preposition like "it is a two-lane road" seems needed here.
 * Not sure how to change this?

Route description

 * By in large I think it is good. The main comment I have is where it says "the school" in Fowler. It looks like it passes multiple schools, a grade school and high school simultaneously. I was originally going to say it would be nice if it was more specific but at the least I think it needs to be plural.


 * "K-98 then reaches its eastern terminus at US 54." No dash in the US-54. Also, an actual or approximate length between the two would be nice.


 * "On K-98 in 2020" Not sure that "On K-98" is needed, as you've already established we're talking about K-98.
 * I think it needs to be added because of the sentence prior, a reader wouldn't know what highway.

History

 * Theres a weird ": 12" next to citation 16. Other than that, I don't see anything right away.
 * The 12 is the page number that has the content in the reference. The reference is multi-paged so it has that so the info can be found quickly.

Major intersections

 * No issues.

Here's my thoughts at first glance, let me know if you have any questions.--Ncchild (talk) 04:16, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
 * HI sorry for delay, I will get to it soon. Just been really busy working. -420Traveler (talk) 11:06, 30 July 2022 (UTC)
 * hey, fixed most things and have a few questions on others. Let me know, sorry for long delay. -420Traveler (talk) 18:33, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Hey, I'm really sorry about the delay as well, I've been moving and starting law school. Let me look over everything now and I'll get back to you. Ncchild (talk) 15:49, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
 * @420Traveler I only see one thing, and it's picky so apologies about that. The second, third, and fourth sentences all start with "the" which gets a bit repetitive. If one could be changed (preferably the third sentence) to start a different way, I think it would flow better. Other than that, it looks good to me! Ncchild (talk) 15:54, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
 * No problem, I agree. I think I got the one you mentioned. -420Traveler (talk) 16:18, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
 * @420Traveler Cool, I'm good with it now, so I'll go ahead and pass it. Ncchild (talk) 16:26, 24 August 2022 (UTC)