Talk:KELO-TV/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vaticidalprophet (talk · contribs) 13:26, 4 August 2023 (UTC)

Just a few notes here:

Vaticidalprophet 13:26, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
 * KELO-TV and its satellites perfectly matched the flow of goods through South Dakota, which centered on Sioux Falls -- clarity? From the second half of the sentence I'm reading this as something like "it was a popular station because Sioux Falls was a manufacturing hub", but I can't see how that follows.
 * More like it was a match to the needs of advertisers.
 * Might be worth contextualizing in "Young Broadcasting ownership" how common/uncommon digital TV access was at the time.
 * Good thought.
 * UTV is not broadcast in Rapid City, where Rapid-owned KKRA-LP was the MyNetworkTV affiliate -- tense of this sentence is confused
 * Reworded.
 * Has anything more come out about the MG/Nexstar ownership in the past 6-10 years?
 * Not...really.
 * The news programs grew more sophisticated and professionalized -- do we have a timeline for this?
 * Reworded to be less puffy.
 * It's worth (dup)linking KSFY and KDLT in the newscasts section, given it's disproportionately likely readers interested in that section will want to compare their coverage.
 * Done
 * Can we give a timeframe on the switch from SD to HD?
 * Done (HD transition of news tends to take up way too much of news sections in articles like this)
 * It might be more natural/less choppy to describe the history of the station's programs (introducing morning programs, afternoon programs, etc) in a dedicated paragraph rather than across separate sparse lines.
 * Done. Now with another ref which will help.
 * KELO-TV additionally rebroadcasts -- no need for 'additionally'
 * Done

Responded. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:20, 4 August 2023 (UTC)


 * All good. I was wondering if actual statistics existed on how many people had digital-compatible devices at that point, but a Google Scholar search was only semi-helpful. Happy to pass this. Vaticidalprophet 18:21, 4 August 2023 (UTC)