Talk:KFC Snacker

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Okay. . maybe. If you want to add stranger-on-stranger theme info, you've got to find reliable, objective sources that discuss this theme in the movie.

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 30 January 2019 and 15 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Dominador495.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:33, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

feedback
How's the sourcing search going? If not so well, then move on to another topic or article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Profhanley (talk • contribs) 18:18, 6 March 2019 (UTC)

updates
The sourcing looks interesting. I'm still not sure what you want to improve in the article. Perhaps you could make a list of things that you plan to improve. Remember: Wikipedia is not the place for original research or interpretation. Profhanley (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 16:45, 18 March 2019 (UTC)

@Profhanley - I decided to scrap the movie idea and move onto something new, sorry for my late reply. I'm still learning how to use this website, so I didn't even see your relplies until last night.

Thanks Ethan S.(Ethan495 (talk) 14:08, 10 April 2019 (UTC))

Peer review
Hello Etahn495, I must say I am incredibly impressed with the way that you wrote about and researched this topic. I fully support the way you shined a light on one of the most respectable fast food creations of the 21st century. There are only a few things I can critique you on because you did such a good, and may i say, groundbreaking job with this article. The first is that it reads as just one large lead, I think adding more sections that you can add to the article would allow you to diversify your focus on the KFC Snacker as well as organizing the information a little better. Another thing would be to maybe add a picture of the KFC Snacker as well as one of the boxes that Wikipedia articles usually have with quick and important information on the topic. The last thing is that occasionally seems like you are a little biased in support of the KFC snacker, but who can blame you? it seems like an incredible sandwich. Thank you so much for this interesting and informative article, I am a big fan :D. Sincerely, Dominador495 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dominador495 (talk • contribs) 21:13, 16 April 2019 (UTC)

Model article
I like this direction a lot better. What is your model article? This will give your editors a better context to gauge your work. Profhanley (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 17:51, 17 April 2019 (UTC)

Closer
You need to take the article draft to the next level: lead, organizing sections, adding links, images, infobox, etc. Profhanley (talk)