Talk:KLJB/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 00:34, 1 May 2023 (UTC)


 * Ooo Iowa station! Will get to this within seven days.  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 00:34, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the speedy response! Pass. Congrats on another GA.  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 01:08, 2 May 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio
Earwig says good to go. No concerns from me either.

Files
Good to go;  is on Commons and public domain.

Prose

 * In § Early history, wikilink Rock Island, Orion, Quad Cities and Fox as their first mentions in the body.
 * "(picking up Channel America programming to fill the void)," – I believe the citation should go after the punctuation instead of before the parentheses.
 * Specific choice here as the citation only covers the material in parentheses.
 * "WBQD-LP, a low-power UPN affiliate" – "low-power" (at least in this sentence) sounds rather strange to me; is an alternative word choice available?
 * No, unfortunately. Low-power is a class of TV station in the United States (notice the -LP ending to the call letters).
 * Oh I see now!
 * "In an unusual arrangement, the production of the newscast was outsourced to Davenport" – very picky concern but how about removing the to make the sentence flow more smoothly?
 * "For EBI Video, the KLJB partnership" – looking at the rest of the article, I believe this sentence should now say "EBI" for consistency.

All items addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:54, 2 May 2023 (UTC)