Talk:KTXH/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 00:34, 1 May 2023 (UTC)


 * Looks interesting! Will get to this within seven days.  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 00:34, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
 * Nice work on another station! Pass.  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 17:51, 3 May 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio
Earwig says good to go.

Files
Good to go;  has a valid non-free use rationale;   is on Commons and has a valid public domain rationale;   was released into the public domain by the uploader on Commons.

Prose

 * In the lead, wikilink independent station to Independent station (North America).
 * "and CPI Subscription TV, subsidiary of cable" recommend adding a here. This is grammatically correct but with "a group led by" at the start of the sentence it sounds strange.
 * "CPI exited the running," – running sounds a bit weird to me; is a better word choice available for is this a correct word usage in US-en?
 * Perhaps wikilink majority stake and FM (in the first paragraph) for readers unfamiliar with their meanings.
 * "broadcasting from studios at 8950 Kirby Drive." – what locality?
 * "audience in the Houston metro," – recommend "Houston metropolitan area" for clarity.
 * I doubt the further information template is necessary as Senior Road Tower can be wikilinked in the text itself.
 * "giving it prime time hours to program" – wikilink prime time.
 * Wikilink NBA.
 * "place on Monday, December 6." – is the day of the week necessary?
 * Wikilink guy-wire.
 * The sentence starting "While orders were placed" is quite wordy with a lot of clauses; could it perhaps be split?
 * "However, negotiations fell through" – do we know why?
 * Unfortunately no.
 * "several months at the FCC, which" – change acronym to "Federal Communications Commission (FCC)".
 * "a 23-year-old Hannah Storm" – sounds slightly sensationalised, in a way. How about something along the lines of "at an early point in her career" etc.
 * "purchase left TVX highly leveraged and highly vulnerable" – the same effect of the text could be achieved if the instances of highly were removed.
 * If you pick up more TVX pages, you will find this phrasing (the section was first used at KTXA), so feel free to change it. This acquisition was the back-breaker for the company.
 * Wikilink United Paramount Network instead of the acronym for consistency.
 * "As part of its acquisition of the Chris-Craft stations" – wikilink if possible.
 * Done. This section is identical to WDCA.
 * Wikilink Warner Bros.
 * "last season on the RSN" – RSN?

All issues fixed,. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:44, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
 * Awesomesauce! I have left one last concern below than I should be able to approve this.  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 15:38, 3 May 2023 (UTC)