Talk:KVDO-TV/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:09, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 20:09, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good.
 * Excellent lead (well-sourced and of reasonable length)!

History of channel 3 in Salem

 * Remove the comma after "Salem in 1952".
 * "Telecasters's" "Telecasters'"
 * I consider "Salem Telecasters" a singular noun per MOS:POSS, so I left this as is.


 * No other issues (also well-sourced).

KVDO-TV as a commercial independent

 * "telecasting February" "telecasting on February"
 * "first ever" "first-ever"
 * "with quality" "with the quality"
 * Remove the comma after "$410,000".

Sale to OEPBS

 * "by Oregon Educational" "by the Oregon Educational"
 * Remove the comma after "lead by December".
 * Add a comma after "two newscasts"
 * "prime time" "primetime" or "prime-time"

Public KVDO

 * "including of the" "including the"
 * "of channel 16, while" "for channel 16 while"
 * "Deschutes County" "Deschutes County's"
 * That hatnote at the bottom seems out of place. Move it somewhere else, or a #See_also section can be made.