Talk:KZDG/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 00:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good.
 * Add a serial comma after "CBS Radio".
 * Other than that, the lead looks good as well.

History

 * "several staff" doesn't sound right as staff already refers to more than one person. Try rewording.
 * "Eastern time" "Eastern Time"
 * "new combined" "newly combined"
 * this isn't correct for the particular case, I've left this alone


 * "require a divestiture" "require divestiture"
 * Add a serial comma after Ajay Bhutoria.
 * Looks like someone added this during the nom—I've trimmed it back but retained one fact with an added source.


 * Add a comma after "June 3, 2019" per MOS:DATECOMMA.
 * "on August 2018" "in August 2018"

Transmitter site

 * "king tide" should link to king tide.
 * "as king tide" "as a king tide" or "as king tides"

Progress
All the changes should be made. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:15, 26 March 2021 (UTC)