Talk:Kaʻiminaʻauao/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 03:22, 19 August 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  03:22, 19 August 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
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 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
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 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
 * May want to expand lead if possible, perhaps with info about her family.
 * She died of the measles at the age of three in an epidemic that killed more than 10,000 Native Hawaiians. suggest:
 * She died of the measles at the age of three, during an epidemic of Measles, whooping cough and influenza that killed more than 10,000 Native Hawaiians.
 * Another relative of the family was the High Chiefess Kapiʻolani who plucked the ʻōhelo berries and openly defied the goddess Pele as a dramatic demonstration of her new faith in Christianity. this seems to imply that the ʻōhelo berries were sacred in some manner; would suggest explaining how they were sacred.
 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  17:42, 23 August 2018 (UTC)