Talk:Kaddish (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 1 August 2012 (UTC)

I'll review this soon. A quick look looks good, good work!


 * Infobox
 * Where is the production code referenced?
 * The DVD case. I haven't added it because I don't think its necessary.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Where is running time referenced?
 * Umm... the actual episode.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Guest actors: Tony should be Tony Oliver
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Lede
 * Link science fiction to science fiction on television
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * "producer" is he a "producer" for the series
 * I don't understand what you are asking here.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * The episode aired in the United States on February 16, 1997 on the Fox → The episode originally aired on the Fox network on February 16, 1997
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * The episode received a Nielsen rating was viewed by 16.56 million viewers → The episode earned a Nielsen rating, being watched by 16.56 million viewers in its intital broadcast
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * "television critics" television is repetitive
 * Umm, weren't you the one who has always told me to change this.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, it doesn't really matter which is used, so whichever should be fine. TBrandley 21:38, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Add actors for the short plot summary in the lead
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Link Vancouver
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * "out their space for the episode.," why is there a period, then a comma, then a new word not in capitals
 * Fixed.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Plot
 * Add actor for Isaac's
 * It's already there.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Add actor for Tony Oliver
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Add actors for various others
 * They're in there, if I could have found them. If not, I didn't add them.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Production
 * In the intro, it says that Gordon is the producer, but here, that is not mentioned
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Link The X-Files in "Writing"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * "Writing" seems to be about Gordon, not Manners
 * I just always add them there.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * "Justine Miceli was chosen to play the role of Ariel; she based her character's sorrowful demeanor on the memory of her own father's death due to cancer." citation/reference needed
 * All of that is sourced to the "prodbook2" citation. I bundled them near the end.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * In "Filming and music", link Vancouver
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Themes
 * Howard Gordon should be Gordon as it is already above once per WP:MOS
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Broadcast and reception
 * "Kaddish" was originally broadcast in the United States on the Fox network on February 16, 1997 → "Kaddish" originally aired on the Fox network on February 16, 1997
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * X from X, consider making a re-write for some. Example: "Writing for X, X"
 * That's only in two, but I changed on to "of"-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)


 * References
 * Ref. 3: Fox Broadcasting Company should be linked there rather than "corporation"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref. 12: Is missing publisher (Dennis Publishing)
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref. 12: Curly quote should be a regular quote after The X-Files on the reference
 * Ref. 14: Cinefantastique is already linked, so unlink now
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)


 * External links
 * "The X-Files Wiki, an external wiki" is repetive say: "The X-Files, an external wiki" instead
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Great article, its fun to read. There are only a few issues to be fixed here. TBrandley 19:43, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I believe I've corrected or explained everything. Thanks for the review.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   20:57, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I'll pass the article. TBrandley 21:38, 2 August 2012 (UTC)