Talk:Kaga ikki/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mr rnddude (talk · contribs) 09:50, 2 August 2016 (UTC)

Hi there I will be taking on the review of this article, expect a full review up by tomorrow (maybe later today). Mr rnddude (talk) 09:50, 2 August 2016 (UTC)

I will be using the above table to complete the review for this article. Mr rnddude (talk) 09:50, 2 August 2016 (UTC)


 * Thank you for this review. With the sourcing and original research issues, I may have cited the wrong pages, or summarized two works and only cited one, so I will look into these. I'm working almost 70 hours this week, so it might take some time before I can address all of the issues. Thanks again, -- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 15:05, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
 * , not a problem, I believe that is the issue myself having been able to identify the occurrence of it in a couple of these places. I am happy to put the article on hold if that would help you, I am in no rush. Thanks for putting forth such a commendable amount of work in this article. Feel free to ping me if you need assistance with something or to notify me when you have rectified the issues. Mr rnddude (talk) 15:09, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I've fixed the grammar/prose issues and the external links. Now to the painstaking task of figuring out the improperly cited content.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 22:27, 8 August 2016 (UTC)
 * . I think I rectified all the remaining content issues Please review my changes. I found that many of the unsupported statements were mentioned in Solomon, and I had forgotten to cite him. And the one section did have content that I summarized inaccurately.-- 3family6 ( Talk to me   &#124;  See what I have done  ) 02:08, 9 August 2016 (UTC)